Project name: No one there Track name: Vocals
Project ID: 21 cc-ID: 35
Artist: Gamer2bn
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User: B_mind Date: 2010-09-07 21:43:26.966 --> ;-) 
Artist imageOh, than I mistaken, sorry. ;-)
User: Gamer2bn Date: 2010-09-07 16:38:56.029 --> but it's not too late 
Artist imageI changed it too it's not too late, my reasoning for this is the lyrics make it seem like the writer (you) didn't want it too be over at the time and the song is directed too her so for her it's not too later she could come back telling her it is too late would be against everything else the song unless if it was changed to be self directed or from a female singer telling the male it's too late.
User: Gamer2bn Date: 2010-09-07 16:15:01.931 --> mic 
Artist imageI intend to re-record with hopefully a better microphone. Also this was converted to mp3 as it wasn't meant to be published. The next I will upload as a high quality wav.
User: B_mind Date: 2010-09-07 10:34:10.305 --> Sound good 
Artist imageHey, well done! I like it! ;-) You are a really good singer! Female chorus singers is a good idea. I think the changed lyrics are perfect. Only the "now" of "But its now too late now" is double. Beginning from "I have a large bed to share" you switch into a deeper feeling. This is very nice. I'm wonderingn it this "feeling" wouldn't apply for the first part of the song as well. You are right. Your microphone sounds extremely clear without any lower frequences. A bit like "phone" sound. Not sure, but I think I heard some clipping too. Did you record/export in good quality like .wav or .aiff ? If so and if there is no clipping I could try to adjust the bass a bit. But only worth it if the recording/exporting quality is sufficient.
User: Gamer2bn Date: 2010-09-07 02:21:52.37 --> Just some thoughts 
Artist imageI think the chorus should be a female singer also you should change this too a duet have a woman singing the same blues as both lovers feel the pain of being apart after the female's parts the male should sing the chorus and after the males the female (by chorus I mean the track chorus not the entire chorus just the voice overs though when the male is singing the chorus track the female should sing the chorus itself.)
User: Gamer2bn Date: 2010-09-07 02:15:06.851 --> Sorry 
Artist imageI changed your lyrics a bit, it seemed like the english was a little off and at times it confused me so I changed it in a way that I think conveys the same message you were going for please let me know if I botched it.

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